Senryu - Unrequited Love With Moon Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Unrequited Love With Moon

Rating: 4.7


unrequited love
moon astonished with bizarre
finding place to hide

Monday, August 17, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2020

Moon hides under moon and expresses sweet love. Moon beautifully motivates mind with greater responsibility giving calmness. An amazing poem is well penned.10

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Michael Jack 17 August 2020

Brilliantly thought. One sided love and now moon knows that you are in love and you are trying to hide yourself and your love and feelings. Wow Seen such things in movies as sacrifice not through poems that too in three lines.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 August 2020

Moonlight! ! ! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 August 2020

Hahahaha it cannot hide from the love be it unrequited. Lovely senryu. I like the sweet surprise at the end.10++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 August 2020

A beautiful Senryu with unique love is amazingly shared. Thanks alot.

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