Senryu Poems Poem by Sandra Martyres

Senryu Poems



The serenity
On the face of the Buddha
Shames his disciples

The tempting ocean
Sucked him into the wide jaws
Of a hungry shark

He dreamed happy dreams
Of more conquests and money
As he slept in jail

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 27 January 2010

the third one i liked...well, the greedy never learn

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Indira Renganathan 27 January 2010

Have meaningful depth....especially the third one....bring out a pleasant smile on the reader's face the other two agreeable to the truth....thank you

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 January 2010

Good greed ends in jail indeed...............well written sandra

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