Senryu - Journey Poem by Poetic Sky

Senryu - Journey

Rating: 4.2


the river flows wide,
taking twists, turns in our lives,
sea waits to arrive.

Thursday, June 1, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: life,human life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Similar to a river, we continuously move forward in our journey towards the final destination, which is the sea. It is where we merge and ultimately lose our identity. This is the essence of life in a nutshell.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 June 2023

Don't listen to Dr. Swain It's lovely

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David Wood 01 June 2023

So true. Everything is on a journey through life.

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M. Asim Nehal 01 June 2023

I am sure you got inspiration from Khalil Gibran's poem ' The river cannot go back.

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