Senryu.3. Blackhole Poem by Valsa George

We all have such an inner place

Psychoanalytical thought about our dream-world expressed beautifully in the poem. Thanks.

great write on dreams not fulfilled thanks Valsa-10

In dreams mind bloom like expression of black hole. Very fascinating expression of fantastic nature. Wise sharing really.10

Exactly. Beautiful expression.

In the sunlit plain Of all minds is a black hole Where scalded dreams lie.....all lines are co related and meaningful. A poem on dream is cutely insightfully delineated. Beautiful poem.

and everything disappers poetic

Brilliant and profound.Thank u.anjandev roy.

and burst and spread all round on a big bang, we see our dreams have changed their shapes, enough flexible to be fulfilled.

True. only you could write this way... I have plenty of black holes. No matter what you write,5 lines.3 liner,2 liner,1 liner or just two words, i'm sure to find lyrics in there.