Senryu - 248 Our Relationship. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 248 Our Relationship.

Rating: 4.8


a bridge on river
you, me, our relationship
the world underpass

Thursday, December 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 08 December 2016

I like the way you wrote this small poem, it can be interpreted in so many ways... a) Relationship between man and nature b) Man and God c) Two humans d) Two lovers e) Two Friends f) Two Soulmates and what not, MAN this is fantastic poem.10 for this one.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 December 2016

Relationship of man and God nicely described in only three lines, a great poem.

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