indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Senryu... - Poem by indira babbellapati

Fell on
A rose-bed
Thorns pricked

Rose petals
In tatters
And redder

Comments about Senryu... by indira babbellapati

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (7/18/2013 12:39:00 PM)

    nice senryu well written (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/2/2013 2:44:00 AM)

    a real good one indira, red petals redder by blood....or blush? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013

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