indira babbellapati

(visakhapatnam, india)

Senryu Once Again


Promises are high
Thick black clouds on the sky
Winds, sly!

It makes us
Jump, leap, up down
Heart, with its own tact!

Ur silence unlocks
My questions unstated
Answers abound

Submitted: Saturday, August 24, 2013
Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 14,007 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/7/2013 10:52:00 AM)

    use of pun and shadowy words used so beautifully/Ur silence unlocks, My questions unstated, Answers abound
    Unuttered uttered many thing nice to read thank (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 234 Points Shahzia Batool (8/30/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    for image and rhyming:

    Promises are high
    Thick black clouds on the sky
    Winds, sly!
    - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    for a specific feel:

    It makes us
    Jump, leap, up down
    Heart, with its own tact!
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    for phrases:

    Ur silence unlocks
    My questions unstated
    Answers abound - - - - - - Beautiful! ! ! (Report) Reply

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