Senryu - 101 Tears And Fears Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 101 Tears And Fears

Rating: 5.0


rain drops on tin roof
pillow drenched with salty tears
world see not the fear.

Thursday, December 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: tears,life,fear
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 31 December 2015

Nice work; with nature displaying its powers.

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T Rajan Evol 01 January 2016

Class haiku showing various moods.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 December 2015

World observes no fear at all even in falling of rain drops. Very wise and humorous sharing.10

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Kelly Kurt 31 December 2015

A beautiful use of 17 syllables

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Darren Jkoeryo 31 December 2015

Class haiku that tells us that the sky is crying for loosing its precious pearls and so the human eyes and both camouflaged by the fear yet nobody knows what....Great haiku Man

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Nosheen Irfan 31 December 2015

Few words, a lot said. Intensity of emotion is beautifully presented in this short poem.10 for sure.

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