Secrets Poem by Creativity Four

Secrets



Secrets

Like snakes that bite
underneath the soil they hide
in the dark, their poisons grow
rejecting ever to go

A person that cruely strikes
At the back with deadly sharp spikes
from a deep foggy room
leaving you to dive in gloom

Words told not to be said
And from the tongue they swang
In the mind, they are hidden
Can not be told, for they are forbidden

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Carney 20 February 2011

Interesting write that has great flow. The images you create are nicely done. Secrets can be destructive in the end. Thank you for sharing.10

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