Secret Devotion Poem by Sandra Feldman

Secret Devotion

Rating: 5.0


Time does not return,
Nor does life,
Therefore, I will
Love you now
And always,
For all the days of my life,
With an invisible feeling
I cannot explain,
That keeps me happy,
Away from delirium,
Practically, sane
But afraid of this love
Without which,
I am nothing!
No more than doubt,
That blindly feels,
Its way about.

Monday, February 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: forever,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 February 2019

Love empowers and strengthens life. Love gives strength for doing duty. Time does not return and life too does not return. But both leave impressions and and we have gathered memories. With true devotion and love we can create poetry and poetry is the best friend for us. An excellent poem is very well penned....10

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C F 04 February 2019

Time does not return, Nor does life, Therefore, I will Love you now And always, ... unforgettable.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2019

(4) .....I cite your words: I will Love you now And always, For all the days of my life, ...............are most touching, tears are filling my eyes, they are still echoing in my mind. Very emotive. Thank you for this Beauty, Sandra. I cannot help writing these words. True compliments for you

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2019

(3) I want to cite here what Mr. Kumarmani Sir said here below: Love empowers and strengthens life. So very true, dear Sandra. I shall read this so touching poem from your gifted heart time and again. Thank you so much for your great contribution to love and life. Love enriches our soul in the life we live........Please read (4) Thank you...........

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2019

(2) We ought not to be afraid of love, therefore poetry is the best medium that we have, we pour our heart's cry out in poetry about that one love. The touching tender words in this poem leave much impression upon my being..Such a loveliest creation. XLibris has edited a poem book of me in which we can read that poems can heal.The book's title? Emeralds Green. Indeed poems can heal an ailing heart. Your poem has a healing factor....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2019

Magnificently written, I am just back from wintersport and read this, this poem is the greatest treat I have read up to now. Such touching words, line per line created, The poem.....about love about life, without which we are nothing, these feelings of love and being loved make us like addiction, without which we cannot live. The title says it all and this poem is the fact of what is felt, thought and lived, Long live to poetry, long live to true love,

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 February 2019

Time does not return, Nor does life, I have been saying that since ages BUT all throw stones at me Glad you speak my mind o popular poet \more will now read ye and now may be me u will at least

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