Sea Of Sadness Poem by Ricardo Louw

Sea Of Sadness

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Lost and lonely without you,
To guide me.
Desperately, I call out your name
Praying for you to help me

But i never heard you answer me
And sadly you drifted away
And i was left to drown,
In the lonely sea of sadness.

I then fought to the surface.
Suddenly I knew that,
I have lost you...And
The love that we had struggled to build
So hard, was gone.
Defeated, i slowly went under.

For if i cannot live with your love,
There is no need to live at all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Krupa ... 25 June 2008

I just loved this poem of yours. Good Work!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 June 2008

sad! ! but well expressed. compact composition

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Ricardo Louw

Ricardo Louw

East London, South Africa
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