Screen Door Poem by Susan Lacovara

Screen Door



He waits by the screen door
Unsure if he's ready to leave
Tempted by what could be out there
Looming in a lazy mid morning

Twice he glances in my direction
Almost asking permission
To leave me behind
On his quest to find
Some solitude in the dripping sun

I am not dressed yet
For my day to unfold
And slide the lock from the door
Granting him his freedom
To wander about
And without my overseeing

I know he wishes I were quicker
In my mundane chores
So to join him ready to pounce
On the wide eyed world
Just outside the screen door

He thinks twice and turns
Giving me a slightly annoyed nudge
And torn between rejection
And affection
Steps back inside
To willingly wait
That I might accompany him
Sometime sooner than later

Tuesday, May 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: waiting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(05/06/14/) An invitation to meet the day....do not dilly-dally, get on your way! From the eyes of Mr. Kitt
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 20 March 2015

I imagined an anxious dog or a six year old boy, being able to see out the screen door but not open it without your help. Trapped inside, waiting, but not willing to set forth without you. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing. Parenthetically, quite different from my poem of the same title.: -)

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Steve Lang 07 May 2014

Really liked this; proof there is beauty in simplicity and honesty. Totally intimidated by 196 poems in your catalogue!

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