Saying Goodbye To The Sea Poem by Not Long Left

Saying Goodbye To The Sea

Rating: 4.5


looking out,
yet looking in,
a million tinkerbells,
sparkling
singing sweetly,
in the frosty fresh sea air, .
moon manages the waves,
moon manages my mind,
sand,
endless grains,
of weathered rock,
seep through my fingers,
a yellow rainfall of time.
somewhere,
not to far away,
a chorus of hot faced laughter,
shatters the peace,
of the beach,
slowly,
slowly
i rise,
look to the skies,
and sigh.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefano Felici 01 December 2005

this poem is very evocative. this is the spirit of the truth... ahem. good images, very good images. and the words run like water.

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Declan McHenry 01 December 2005

Wow. Excellent. A couple of small typo's distract the flow but otherwise an excellent piece Vincent.

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