Saying Goodbye Poem by Star Shine

Saying Goodbye

Rating: 4.0


Crying eyes, broken heart, depression that will never stop.
Saddened face, puffy eyes, thinking about all these lies.
Breathing out one last time, wishing I could say goodbye.
To these whom I love should never part because they mean alot to me, deep in my heart.

Saturday, December 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,goodbye
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
E.j. Langley 05 December 2015

I can almost hear the sobs and see tears on the page. Emotionally charged.

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Kelly Kurt 05 December 2015

But new hellos can be wonderful. Thanks, Star

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 December 2015

It is always very difficult to say good bye to one's loved ones. A very short and sweet lovely write. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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