Saved Poem by Bethany Maxwell

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Rating: 4.5


Bring me to my knees,
In an empty stone building,
Cold walls around my heart,
Falsely beautiful light of stained glass on my face,
And save me.

Hold the barrel against my skull,
Cold medal on flesh,
Look in my eyes; desperately pleading,
Pull the trigger,
And save me.

Make me your angel,
Scratch wings in my back,
With your fingernails,
Moan God’s name in my ear,
And save me.

Close your eyes,
Block out manipulating pixels,
False expectations and demands,
Question forced religion and thoughts,
Calm your heaving heart,
And save yourself.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
By: Bethany Maxwell
September 4th,2013
©2013
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 12 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Bethany M. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Saadat Tahir 19 June 2014

looks like a written picture of a meatloaf number... gripping and enulfing its very nicely written liked

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Gajanan Mishra 04 September 2013

calm your heaving heart and save yourself, Very good line. thanks.

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