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trapped inside a hollow shell
with no way out of this hell
stuck into this state of mind
sucked into a place hard to find

won't anyone come save me?

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Stephanie Souter 16 December 2008

i liked it short but deep..........i give it a 8.5

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Rachel The Hair Guru 16 December 2008

Intense, emotional.

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May N

May N

Cagayan de Oro, Philippines
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