@saturday Night (02-2009) (/) Poem by Jordan Legaspi

@saturday Night (02-2009) (/)

Rating: 5.0


Saturday Night


Another bottle of beer that fancy forlorn evening
To chill out the spirit after the arduous lonely week
While smoke fume the air; to wrap his broken wing
Of the face painted blue and gray. Insidious trick;
Sweet words to capture the prey -the chiseled manly,
The incense of youth, to his malicious appetite
Hi and hello -conventional and casual, to be friendly:
cast his spell, let fly the charm, be consumed tonight;
Smile soon the laughter of jovial mask, the ha, ha, ha, yet sad
-watching but not seeing the scene, the play of the drifter man
Bodies swayed and hayed; sight like of angels, so odd
-talking but not speaking the tongue, to define the whole damn;
Alas! His lustful eyes; come rejoin to me Apollo's pawn
worship the unholy, to ignite their soul before the dawn.



Note:
P.U.B. (Pick Up Boys Collection) Issue # 02 series of 2009
'Saturday night' is a story of aged-gay, hunting around for young and fresh guy.
The typical 'story' in the bars, disco houses, coffee shops, and even in the streets of our respective cities.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 16 September 2009

Sounds nice Boys meet girls and have fun....Men 10s for the write

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Chitra - 16 September 2009

a mature write for a mature subject...well expressed!

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Francisco R. Albano 15 September 2009

expressive. revise to correct grammatical errors.

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Ency Bearis 15 September 2009

a substantial write to the theme and so mature in the sense..great poetic structure...

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Catrina Heart 15 September 2009

Great figurative language used here...well rhymed...your sensitivity to this theme grows in you........10+++++

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Jordan Legaspi

Jordan Legaspi

Davao City, Philippines
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