Satire Poem by Vizard Dhawan

Satire

Rating: 5.0


beneath the sky, someone is craving for one
sitting besides the river, someone is longing for one
within the day, within the night, all aware
stars are in dilemma, whom I am searching for
all pains are heeled in just one look and glance
for whom I will make my life the basic instance
for one only my heart will throb and feel blood
eyes stand still on whose presence-they should
dark night asks me the reason of this painful lonliness
even though it is praying for me to be God bless

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 06 December 2012

beautiful.......i love it no need for more......

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Jahan Zeb 06 December 2012

Very imaginative and not easy to swallow. I liked it for you have kept your readers guessing or I should say you have left something for the readers to come out with. A nice poem like your nice name. Thanks for the title.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 December 2012

I love this poem. O poet Dhawan, congratulation. I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote.

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Asif Andalib 06 December 2012

Nice one. Keep on writing

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