If saree caught on a thorns
even gentle pull is damaging
hard snap will ripped apart.
O precious gems from Adam's Rib,
guard your thin sheet saree
keep out from the sharp spines
Saree is the crown of yours
If caught on thorns, what will damage,
the thorns or the saree?
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
interesting which will be damaged? the thorns or the saree?