Sacrifice! ! ! Poem by harshika ram

Sacrifice! ! !



You are the person i want,
My dream come true.
You gave me love, you gave me a joy
A mistake i made though don't know why?
Without realizing or without meaning to
I hurt your feelings even more.
But i love u lots can't you see,
Your the one just right for me!
I'll give my life to get you back,
I'll do whatever you say i promise you that.
Just give me a chance to prove myself,
And be with me like all these years.
I'll show you that we can live together,
With love and joy forever and ever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nithin Pradeep 08 November 2008

hey harshika! I really appreciate u for such a charming poem.I cant write on such a theme! But once you select such a theme, u shud view it from different angles every time u write. for example, try something like nature or ur love for some small stuff. you can include things like symbolising it with something else too!

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