Row - Boat Poem by Sajna Kailas

Row - Boat

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</>On a monstrous lonesome night
In a limping white- beard row- boat
with severe chilling breeze
where waves imitate a belly dancer
I am rowing my boat
Towards a peaceful roomy land
But seems the land is far away
Distance; the more I covered
the most I have to cover!
My muscles feels a fatigue
the lantern reduce its oil
I am looking for a companion
where loneliness stucking the journey
nobody is found there, and
no hands to hold me up.
helplessly, to a land of hope
still I am rowing my boat! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dead Leaf 12 November 2011

Don't worry dear friend you will reach the land of hope very soon.....nice poem.....but to me loneliness is the best companion

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Dave Walker 14 November 2011

A great poem really liked it. A good write.

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John Raubenheimer 30 May 2012

I like what Rose says about your poem. It speaks to us like a dream, deeply-felt.

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Dead Rose 11 January 2012

This's amazing...rowing the boat of life with an oar of pain to a land of hope.: : : : 10*****************************10 Rose))))

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Subodh Pandey 03 December 2011

nicr write. somehow it gives a feeling of seclusion

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Jinal Oswal 30 November 2011

A hope, is like a sunlight in dark.. energy booster when we low.. Good write :)

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Ramesh Rai 20 November 2011

a very nice poem you have composed, xlent.you must the goal of hope, it is also my prayer to God. the land of hope is very near.

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