Let Me Sing My Song Of Love! Poem by Sajna Kailas

Let Me Sing My Song Of Love!

Rating: 4.2


One day from a far empire
you came to my lonesome thoughts
I was totally sedated by your eloquence.
Now you, my companion of all my invisible emotions.

I myself became the shebang of your opus
the songs you playing are melodious,
giving me a mood of self - realisation
oh my songster, come with a sitar
and play the amorous sonnet all for me.

On a passage where shadow creeps
i just listen your pads impatiently,
Await you to hug me ln warmth and love
as I melt in the pacific moonlit night
overwhelmed by your silent love
that memories make me nostalgic.

oh my God! what an alliance is this?
not in love but have all love,
not a friend but a close friend,
soulmates with mutual understandings.
a relation; the more i want to quit
the most i want to be in! ! ! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Federico del Corazón 16 December 2011

You are a maestro as you colorfully express the most honest desires. Beautifully played my dear!

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Saadat Tahir 19 December 2011

v nice be happy :)

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Ramesh Rai 22 December 2011

xlent. I told u once you possess an extraordinary talent. u have to recognize it. well versed. great write.

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Binish Cd 31 December 2011

a well penned poem about love. good job........

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Raj Arumugam 10 January 2012

another poem with good rhythm and smooth lines, Sajna

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Ken E Hall 22 July 2012

Love and its power wields its strength thru this poem so eloquently giving the reader knowledge it comes from the heart, indeed sing along...regards

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 July 2012

I myself became the shebang of your opus the songs you playing are melodious, ............................ Lotus of love opens up by touch of sparking warmth Magnum opus of creation spackles of iridescence Dream slowly melts into oceanic dream of blue Rocked up pine over peaks of snow beacons to glow.............oh what a songs of love by precision wrought by ingenuity through imagery making reader to meander beyond, thought provoking,10+++++, thanks for sharing

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Khalil Salik 26 February 2012

Meta-romantic; it is extraordinary, dear

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Swarnendu Biswas 08 February 2012

beautiful, speechless! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Dead Rose 11 January 2012

Beautiful poem...great write sajna...10*** Rose)))))))

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