Romance Point [4] Poem by Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty

Romance Point [4]

Rating: 5.0


Tipped toe-ly
Dusk droops,
Plays with
Naive teen.

She fills up
Stoic beech wood
With rustle and sigh.

Ripples whisper
O’ teen
Do you hear: Love?
From moon.

Teen bewildered
Say what; She..?

Love had pored, she-
On Romance Point,
Fragrance smeared
Feet of
Her…?
She quests for!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Ripples whisper // O’ teen // Do you hear: Love? // From moon. I’m sure Moon has heard and responded to Love call.

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Photode Photode 19 November 2009

Questing love in myriad form is a favorite emotion of every poet. Here Dr. Sakti presented a different formant and I enjoyed it much, .

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Shanti Gloss Bagchi Glitter 22 October 2009

She quest love from Nature. It’s a love with Nature what I get. Ten PS: Subtle! !

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Mary Garcia 27 June 2009

Really nice poem that invite us to see an take care of our feet

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