Amnesia - 5 Poem by Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty

Amnesia - 5

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AMNESIA - 5
esspeecee … 09.09.09

I drink
Pot-full of Amnesia
To ward off
Every Intelligentsia,
Bring alive murderous
In-built Militia,
Dive into:
Essential Insomnia
With dancing Dementia.

Churn: Crippling
Cerebral Osteomalacia,
Hibernate in Asphyxia,
Welcome Euthanasia
‘Tis my
Coveted Ambrosia!

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 14 September 2009

Interesting indeed! fine diction! 10+

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Surya . 15 September 2009

great idea.beautiful poem. voted10 surya

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Carol Gall 15 September 2009

lovely poem dr sakti 10

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Anjali Sinha 17 September 2009

lovely poem with rich use of words surely a tenner from me

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Ravi A 21 September 2009

I am not familiar with certain technical terms but I can say about one thing. We need not invite certain conditions to forget the pains in life. Instead, we can view life as a Sthitha Pragna as described in Geetha to get over the pangs of pain. Our attitude towards life is all the more important. Pain and pleasure are mainly mental rather than pyhsical and material. What can be painful to me need not be the same for you. So, what is pain and pleasure? It all stems out of our reactions to situations. Reactions are important.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 October 2009

MMMMMM! This is something........new experience with new form poetry......

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Invited vices to eradicate and bloom and boom the already in-built virtues. A different way of expression from Amnesia 1. Ten+++

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Adeline Foster 27 September 2009

I love the way some of your readers are honest enough to say this is just jargon and we can't or don't want to understand it. Adeline

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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 September 2009

I ca't understand all the medical jargon. I'm gonna read another piece.

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Miriam Maia Padua 23 September 2009

great share for us... all about these..such a great info We just have to prepare... when we reach Senescence Stage.. thanks for sharing 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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