In life
All roads have ups and downs
If too close together
We call them potholes
Jim McGill, May,2023
I like this poem, it is very simple and true. The life has ups and downs and at the end of all, we can enjoy both.
I really like your poem, is interesting and it makes me feel you lost someone. You use alliteration in your poem in the therd line 'too' and 'together' Keep continue writting.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I don't care for potholes! But your poem slowed me down a bit!
Thank you. Great one liner.