Dave Alan Walker

Freshman - 2,405 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

River Of Lies


I'm lost
in a river of lies
Caught in the current
of this human trait

There's somethings in life
you can do nothing about
You just have to wait
until people see for themselves

That there's people with two faces
who fool everyone around

They'll lie to you
They'll steal from you
They'll believe their own lies
to keep their way of life

Watch out for this kind

Submitted: Saturday, December 31, 2011

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  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (4/11/2012 4:01:00 PM)

    Truth can be found if only one does recognize that the lies come from within man. Truth takes reassessment and research.
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Ebi Robert (1/3/2012 12:55:00 AM)

    poetry that does not only teach us but read us. Good job here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shadow Girl (1/2/2012 6:34:00 AM)

    Sadly too true, well conveyed
    -SG (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Neetha Sasidharan (1/1/2012 6:24:00 AM)

    wow! ! !
    dis is the reality..u hv penned it
    grt poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Silentpoet Grl (1/1/2012 3:19:00 AM)

    powerful poem - sadly so true - great write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Swetha V (12/31/2011 9:10:00 AM)

    yes sir you are right. their is no true face (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/31/2011 7:51:00 AM)

    Yes, it's the truth! ! ! people with two faces! !
    This traits are more dangerous like viruses and they will nullify everything in us! ! !
    I hate their peek and snook! ! !
    A great poem! ! 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sajna Kailas (12/31/2011 4:31:00 AM)

    yeah you are very correct.this world is full of fake identities and liars. cant found any noblest among the rampaging humanity.
    good work Dave! loved it! God Bless You! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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