Rising This New Ray Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Rising This New Ray

Rating: 5.0


From the womb of Eastern Sky
Taking birth child sun is new
With new crying of light this
We feel cheerful moments sure.

From last death at last evening
We have witnessed dull rays
These are rising now with vow
On birth we feel these glitters.

Mind blows to have wind in row
Freshness scribbles new thought
I witness a special new ray for
My life becomes righteous pure.

Rising this new ray to give joy
This will teach wisdom of life
By boon of father we stand here
We see this new horizon new sun.

Tuesday, November 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,morning,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 25 November 2015

Yet another masterpiece, after reading your poems I feel like I should live with nature rather than in concrete jungle.10++

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Dogma Daniman 17 October 2020

Rising of new rays bring new hope and living essence. This poem is very interesting one.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 April 2019

Rising from the day.. beautifully expressed.. good 10

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Pushpendra Patel 19 February 2019

Freshness scribbles new thought. This we witness through nature. This is a lovely poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 March 2016

Freshness! ! Wisdom and life; with the muse of nature. Nice piece of work.

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Hazel Durham 01 December 2015

The beauty of nature has a huge impact on people as they watch the rising sun in awe of it's glorious splendour, it's rays warm our hearts and souls with joy that shine from our eyes! Great write, so beautiful!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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