Rising Rising In Mind Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Rising Rising In Mind

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I am rising, I am rising in mind
Bind me not in the dark I am still
I am stable with my vision and love
I know you very well dear father.

Rising to light my life is definite
I know you give boon ever at moment
That is why I do not urge but I get
Meeting with you is too fixed in luck.

I write my fortune by my action only
This determines my birth's direction
I know I act here as per law of nature
Still I am rising towards truth daily.

I am the new sun in sky of my hopes,
I rise to reflect rays of my love
You teach to do so by practice ever
Obeying your command I am rising sure.

Tuesday, December 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 15 December 2015

'I am the new sun in sky of my hopes, I rise to reflect rays of my love' is very positive. Full of hope the lines flow so sweet.

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Rajnish Manga 15 December 2015

The poem reflects a life which is happily 'Obeying your command I am rising sure' but at the same time dedicating oneself to karma or action to be able to claim God's bliss. Amazing poem indeed. I write my fortune by my action only This determines my birth's direction

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Kelly Kurt 15 December 2015

By our own actions are lives are surely directed

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 May 2016

Using the mind positively to help all mankind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Terry Craddock 24 December 2015

'I am rising, I am rising in mind Bind me not in the dark I am still I am stable with my vision and love' awesome lines, the gift before continuum, the work in poetic completion

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Savita Tyagi 17 December 2015

Beautiful poem. Full of hope and optimism.

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Bharati Nayak 16 December 2015

I am new sun in sky of my hopes I rise to reflect rays of my love You teach to do so by practice ever Obeying your command I am rising sure- Marvelous reflections of enlightened feelings.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 December 2015

Beautiful soliloquy with positive attitude, hope and full of self confidence. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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