Rip, Dreamers Poem by Jenn Rayl

Rip, Dreamers

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Where have they gone,
The lofty ‘idealings',
The stalwart idols,
Compassionate feelings?

Brought to their knees
The leaders of daughters and sons.
Slashed to the ground
By hate and the folly of guns.

In their hands - destruction,
Their eyes - remorse.
In their hearts, no compassion,
Their souls forlorn.

Where is the laughter?
The joy is gone.
The dreams took flight
With the century's dawn.

Cruelty and avarice, concentrated.
Even their words are desecrated.

Where is the faith
That all is good?
That we'd help one another
As best we could?

Gone with the ones who lead us astray.
Gone with the wars that won't go away.
Gone with the liar, the racketeer type,
‘Til all that remains is greed and hype.

The bugaboo-pushers,
The malls and marts
And cheerless faces
From empty hearts.

All that remains
Is merely clay -
The American Dream
Has passed away.

Rip, Dreamers
Tuesday, March 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: society
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 06 April 2016

Insightful and passionate piece well brought forth, with clarion call for universal brotherhood of man. Lovely diction in good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Jenn. Please read my poem COLOSSAL MISCARRIAGE OF JUSTICE.

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Tom Billsborough 30 March 2016

Liked this very much. Anxious to read more. You have a very powerful style. Well done. Tom Billsborough

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Jennifer Rayl 31 March 2016

Thank you for responding to my poem. I have MANY more and will try to post in the next few days. Your comments were very much appreciated!

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Very well written. Good effort.

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Jennifer Rayl 31 March 2016

Thank you!

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