Rip Apart Poem by Hannah Rose
Rip Apart
Rip apart
The pieces that were never there slip through my fingers
I don’t bleed
I don’t cry
I don’t move
I sit
My lips parted
No smile
No frown
I sit
My hands struggling to grasp where dark and light meet
I sit
I try and see
I try to be all I wish I was and am not
Rip apart my soul
Rip it
Can you?
Can you defy my defiance?
Can you take away my pride?
No
No
Only I have that power
I am not mistaken in that
I never give up
I’ll never give in
This is not my weakness
This is my strength
My defiance
I will not change and bend
I will not let myself down
I will not give in
Yet
Here I sit
I sit
I sit
Weak and powerless externally
But internally
I am raging
Inside
I am alive
Rip apart
You can’t rip me apart
I am to strong
My walls are to powerful
My water flows to pure
Of this
Of this I am sure
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5/4/2024 6:36:53 PM # 1.0.0.1119
this poem had a good rrhythmic flow. i enjoyed it. good job. :) and in those words you say alot, those are powerful words. its good to be that strong. things may knock you down but hey wont rip you apart, they may discourage you but you dont give up nor give in. just wonderful. keep it up. for critisizm this poem was kinda scaddered in a way, but soumnded good, it was a lil rough but still good. keep it upnd work on those things. if you dont mind, may you please read a couple of my poems and be honest and give me critisism as well.