Revision Poem by Douglas Scotney

for the Os who missed last week
and those who wanted a reminder,
T gave an explanation,
upon whose cessation,
me made a suggestion,
almost exactly what she just said.

'that's what I', 'that's what T',
'just said', was said,
that me hadn't understood
or was being lowly witty.

whisper was that me was mad.

to get to the truth, take a look at

the room
............................T..
O..O.......................O..O
me..O.......................O..O
O..O.......................O..O

whose large vacant belly
gave
me room
for private thought,
which is exactly what me was doing
while the Os were being taught.