Kim Hooten

Rookie (October 11,1988 / West Allis, Wisconsin)

Revenge - Poem by Kim Hooten

Tears the mind can't tell are true,
Pain the heart can't share.
Anger wrapped up in deceit,
It's more than I can bear.

The hurt and torture deep inside,
The scalding pain of hate.
The sadness deep inside my soul,
That anger did create.

The anger causes pain inside,
Too deep to understand.
And the pain, in turn, will cause,
More malice to my hand.

The scourge I lay upon you now,
You surely cannot break.
This curse will last for on and on,
You've made a grave mistake.


Comments about Revenge by Kim Hooten

  • Rookie Jeremy Williams (12/18/2012 11:20:00 AM)

    Very dark, Kim, but very strong. (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
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  • Rookie Lia Stroud (10/6/2009 7:02:00 PM)

    wow you explain this emotion thats hard toexplain in words. awsome peom. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Preeti - is here! (10/17/2006 10:15:00 PM)

    *phew* glad it's not a revenge on me. this one's very powerful Kim!

    Preets (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cassie Campton (5/25/2006 1:31:00 PM)

    Wow, heavy, but well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 19, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, November 21, 2005


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