Revelation (Part One) Poem by christopher murphy

Revelation (Part One)

Rating: 2.5


Do you really exist
my dream of a soul mate?
I feel you,
as i feel the fresh breeze in my face
as i stand on the summit of a hill,
overlooking the beautiful valley below.
I feel you,
as i walk along the river in summer,
counting the trout rising.
I feel you,
as i watch in awe
the buzzard gliding on the thermals high above,
Yet i long for a soul mate to come.
Could you be one and the same?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

The one can only be told by time. Well done. Lovely write

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Joseph Poewhit 15 August 2008

Poem has a quiet beauty to it.

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Brandon Dugan 08 August 2008

amazing i really liked your descriptions :)

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