Reminiscence Poem by Amitava Sur

Reminiscence

Rating: 5.0


You indulged me
With some bad habits
By allowing taking rest
In your safest warm lap
Underneath your soft cute breasts!

So restless was I
During those busy working days
You calmed me, rested me
With your pleasing cool jest.

You won my heart tamed me
With your mesmerizing fit,
I can never forget you
Nor I feel parted from you
Though you’re no more visible in our nest.

Love you, I love you dear
Though separated for good.
You reminisce with hues of a Rainbow
Though the sun had already set.
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Amitava (2.4.2015) 12-15 am.

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Reminiscence
Friday, May 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: remembrance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kavya . 06 May 2015

so beautiful a poem this is...the love for his wife and the missing factor...though she is not around, she is definitely missed and felt every moment - a very poignant write Sir

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 May 2015

Nostalgic and reminiscent in a winsome way, lovesick feel presented in an appealing way and style! Thumbs up for this freeverse. And regards!

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 May 2015

A Beautiful poem filled with warmth of love. Photo is fantastic matches with the poem. Loved reading it.

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Roseann Shawiak 02 May 2015

An amazingly tender poem about your love, it gives insight into a man's side of loss. We don't always think of a man's love for his wife, but you have portrayed it beautifully. Giving us a glimpse into the sorrow of your masculine heart. A very heart-touching poem, Amitava. I love it's essence and passion, you have shown both through your heart in these lines.

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