Release Poem by Josh Alfred

Release

Rating: 5.0


Out goes smoke
In comes air
Left alone
No one there.
Going some place
But, not sure where
Eyes are open
I am just aware.
Not sure what
I will have to forebear
Till I release my soul
Without a care;
And just let go
Nothing left, to be here.

Saturday, February 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,release,soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 01 February 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Josh Alfred. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Soran M. H 01 February 2020

capturing very fantastic moment and made out of it a wonderful poem with deeper meninges of freedom, it is amazing piece of work, it deserves 10/10 thanks for sharing

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 February 2020

I will have to forebear Till I release my soul Without a care; And just let go Nothing left, to be here. a very fine poem. thinking of the soul and life. tony

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