Relax Poem by EMMALINE ORTIZ

Relax

Rating: 5.0


Sitting alone in a quiet place
Defining 'What is life'
Looking far beyond at nothing.
Wondrin' what kind of future is there to face
Thinking 'what is right'
Soul-searching while fall season is forthcoming.

As the wind blows, improving the silence
Everything around shows no signs of violence
When pain runs through the veins feeding the soul with sorrow
The heart grows wiser, believing there's a whole new world tomorrow.

Be strong, be calm. Just be humble every time
It won't take long, it will soon come. Just don't stumble; be sublime.

September 20,2009
Winnipeg, Manitoba

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 28 September 2009

Nice poem. Sublimation is the essence. Keep pondering and writing... Best Wishes Naseer

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 27 September 2009

This is a perfectly wonderful piece of writing (a good poem): I love it. Relax and keep on writing.

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R.k Das 22 September 2009

such a personal dilemma described in the poem is so natural and human, , , there are such moment when one has to sit and ponder, , , and though it is very hard to 'relax' thanx for such a nice poem, ,

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