Refresh Poem by Rob Lamberton

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Rating: 4.3


Refresh me like the shore
Ever changing neath the tides
Crash Your waves upon me

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Monday, January 16, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: waves,change,Trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 31 January 2023

what beautiful imagery that you crafted for this lovely succinct poem... a billion stars and a fav

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2023

Thank you Susan! May your joys outnumber the sands!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 18 January 2023

That final line. Crashing the poem shore. Nice one, Rob

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2023

Thank you kindly Kesav for that positive wave of encouragement!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 January 2023

Brilliant Write

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Rob Lamberton 17 January 2023

Thank you LeeAnn! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 January 2023

Beautiful poetic expressions with stunning images.A great succinct write.

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2023

I'm surrounded by an ocean of beautiful poetry and sea pens with fluorescing colors! Thank you!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 17 January 2023

let me buy the love and be fresh in it~

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2023

The ocean gives freely to all!

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