Reflections Poem by Guarded Heart
Reflections
Outside the storm is raging
but will soon be breaking
And left will be the gathered rain
like mirrors, but falsely reflecting
A still puddle reflects calmness and tranquility
a world i do not know
Yet with each newly added drop
the ripples are sent scattering
And a true glimpse is caught
of a world turned upside down
And for a moment i see you
and all that we've been through
I always believe, it is better to see after deep reflection. The view is much clearer. I loved your poem, and if you really are the age you claim, you are a rising star in poetry to be sure. Your penultimate cuplet reminds me of sudden turmoil that grief brings, freefalling! No a wanna be place for anyone, but take it from one who has been there! You do land and survive, you just have to believe in that. 10 from impressed Tai
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4/27/2024 11:44:06 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I really liked it good job. Lylyanna