Reflection Of Your Soul Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Reflection Of Your Soul

Rating: 4.9


In your anger, despair and unfulfilled dreams
Million thoughts cross the stream
Very few are lucky to sail
Rest all loose and fail
Leaving a bad trail
But that is not all
Your life will throw
Many challenges at you
Ultimately, that will decide
How you prepare and what you perform
End result is nothing but reflection of your soul

Thursday, January 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical ,soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 10 January 2019

This is one of the best poems I ever read after the start of 2019. Magnificently worded and thought, Asim, I have respect for the simple subject, but perfectly rendered. An amazing poem to my heart. True poetic art. Thank you for sharing this poem with the beautiful Title. A 10 and much more for the Vote/Rating.

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S H 10 January 2019

You are right. I also liked it.

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M Asim Nehal 11 January 2019

Thank u so much for your review and kind remarks, I am happy you liked it, It motivated me to write more such poem, Thanks again..Ms Sylvia.

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Aqua Flower 11 January 2019

A nice philosophical write about life. What challenges we face and how we deal with them reflects who we are. Really liked this!

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S H 10 January 2019

This poem takes us on a ride to how we see this life in ups and downs, highs and lows and when we are pushed to the corner. It is reflection of our soul that guides us to live this life and enjoy. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 January 2019

Life faces many challenges. Many unfulfilled dreams scribble mind. Result of every action is reflection of soul, the way he thinks and behaves. An amazing and brilliant poem is well penned...

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M Asim Nehal 11 January 2019

Thx much Kumarmani Ji...

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Rini Shibu 10 January 2019

How you prepare and how you perform matters.. thanks dear Asim

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M Asim Nehal 11 January 2019

Thx Much Rini

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 January 2019

P.S. I have added this poem to MyPoemList..

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