Reflection Poem by Brian Dorn

Use of words, awesome.A true reflection Patricia

Short but has plenty of impact.

Fantastic, effective use of the Biblical teachings, Brian! I like this a lot. Thank you.

A beautiful and terse reflection of a Biblical theme. Susie.

Well done, Brian! ! ! !

What do you gain by judging me Just whose reflection do you see excellent expression 10+++++++++

Love it. You have a lovely way with words. I aspire to cultivate similar skill.

Well done, Brian. Sorry for the delay in getting on here, but I told you I would eventually. I have block at the moment but hope to write very soon, will let you know. I have a poem which reminds me of this poem its called By Being you.0x0

Outstanding analysis, Brian. So many self appointed arbiters of good sit in the pews each weekend with their chins touching the ceiling joists. If they were to really read the passages in John and Matthew that you alluded to they would rip the subversive pages from their books.

Hi Brian, Everyone judges Brian, It's sad. It would be a great world if people accepted people for who they are but it's not like that. Everyone is competitive and it can be cruel. Excellent poem. Great message.