Bonaparte Poem by Brian Dorn

The complexities of a female mind exposed - the frustration oozed out of this one Brian. Loved the strength of the rhyme and metre, seemed to echo the thoughts ticking over in the narrator's mind. Warmest wishes, Justine.

Yes I think you are attracted to someone. You said in this poem. Funny kind of poem it is very unique. I like it very much. Take care.

So much love... this poem made me smile

Ah! she really is a puzzle, isn't she? Nice poem! Sujata

This one is a very creative and fun poem to read Brian. I love how you keep the comparisons related throughout your poem, that is hard to do! Great poem thank you

You definitely captured this, however love games are very dangerous games to play.--Melvina--

i know this game. it's never fun, and no-one wins. lovely way to capture it all with words though. nice job.: -) Virginie

That's why we love them! And when you finally work it out and think you've captured her heart for sure, that's exactly when you'll lose it. It's the sweetest game. Great representative wordplay.Clever, clear and concise.

dump her and take me! just kidding, brian - i like how my tongue works when telling this one. great craft!

hey brian.. this is an interesting poem...cleverly penned... excellent! Asma...