Recalcitrant Memory Poem by Martin McLean

Recalcitrant Memory

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Memory's deception is tantalising
Especially when it is incomplete.
The blast from an errant V1 Flying
Bomb showered glass, knocking us off our feet.
My mother was flat out, quite motionless.
Two years old what could I do? Quite helpless.

That I do remember. Then blank. Later,
Mum tells me, in hospital coming round.
'Where's my boy? ' None had news to give her.
There were only the two of us around.
She found me in hospital near enough,
But five days after and with Whooping Cough.

I remember I was tied down in a bed
By a nurse, on the roof. The sun shone straight
In my eyes but I could not move my head.
Then my mother came to me so elate.
I'd had two days of medical support.
Of the other three there was no report.

Many years, from records I found
The V1, launched in Belgium, came down
In London, the other side of a mound
Fifty metres from us. Only the top crown
Of a hillock saved us. My thought
Was only on the five days I had not caught.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Three probably traumatic days of early childhood with no record or memory are more significant possibly for my life than the fact that death was only narrowly avoided.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Sinclair 05 November 2013

Absolutely beautiful Martin. The bond of mother and child clinging desperately to each other during the destruction and devastation of war. Your poor mum must of been beside herself.. My favourite type of writing human nature and history combined with family bonds. Bravo dear poet. Ty for sharing. Karen.

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