The thirsting Soul inside each man
Is unique in its mould craving
For its own imagined goals
Unfettered by barriers it is allowed
To build its own Kingdom fair
With its rules as just as it thinks
Sometimes a clouded mind
May include a moat, a fort
And prejudices few thrown in
Whatever is imagined it is so
Within each ones mind
The idealistic imagined world
Is alone, Isolated, undisturbed
Remaining free and unconquered
Each Soul remains an uncrowned king.
But, from childhood we find
We are unable to establish
Our rules in reality – Father
He refuses and disapproves
Mother raises her objections
Teachers want us to keep quiet
Not just our enemies we find
Even our friends want their way
Each step in life is caught between
Obstacles and opportunities
Situations beyond our control
Clash of each ones inner rules
Leads to chaos in reality!
Some Souls want to rule the roost
Some just want some peace
All opt for some easy compromise
All other than the lonely poetic Soul
Silent observer sensitive to all
Be it people, nature, experiences
Both physical, mental or sublime
Unable to compromise he remains
Athirst in the desert waiting
For the early morning dew
To quench his thirst upon
He remains true to the dream
Which he holds in his heart
Sitting by the busy street of life
He cries out his wares – Free!
Free! ! Wisdom and Truth for all!
He cries to an unheeding crowd.
A beautiful poem........and I agree with david child......the verses are unique.
As usual a great theme. We may be prisoners in our physical surroundings, but the soul is always free.
hey angel great narrative..very very nice a string of lifes happenings....done beautifully even if at the cost of brevity cheers
Perfect poem. I really really like it. But you can also check mine too on
...... A thirst in the desert waiting......; how aptly you have described the humans, angelina! But, usually one remains unaware of it, till the nagging of sub-conscious starts hitting hardly. Strange! ! !
angel, the people who travel ahead of time will be marginalized, misunderstood, ill-treated and finally brutally killed with fame.........
Here, you have beautifully portrayed the Nature of an individual. You have gone deep into it and dug out nice verses. There is the difficulty for an individual when he is in intercourse with the world, as you point it out. Every individual has his own individual nature and it need not intersect with our individual nature. If we look at the situation, we can see that my Nature is quite natural for me as the other person takes his individual Nature to be quite natural. If both these Natures contain no common footing, the mental strain sets in at the level of exchange of views and ideas. We can experience our life standing only within our individual nature and not standing within another's individual nature. This is the greastest barrier that everyone faces in life. Yet we can overcome the situation by a little thought and reflection. The actual problem is that we have naturally identified ourselves with our individual nature. By changing our attitude towards this (acceptance of life is a pre-condition) , we can see that we can actually raise our gross Nature to higher levels. Udhava had this attitude and so he sought the help of his higher nature (Sreekrishna, here) for better insight of life. We are all to be Udhavas for better mental evolution but we haven't the proper attitude for it. Actually, the Udhava Geetha is our own story but we consider him only as a legendry character. No. Not all. It applies to us very much. Actually, the illustration of Udhava has its bearing on the Bhagavad Geetha verses 'Udhareth Aatmanam...'. It clearly says, only the individual can raise his levels and nobody can really help him. This means that no teacher can really teach anybody unless the sparks happens within. Teacher is only an aid but the real process happens deep within the individual Nature of man.
Much truth, reflects human nature well. TRUTH usually finds deaf ears
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love it: ..! You have a real skill; Here is my 'take on the central verses; ....................................... .... Not just all our enemies - we find those friends - that want their way and to their ends each step in life is caught between all our opportunities ... comments..?