Razor Poem by Hans Raj Sharma

Razor

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Walking the way
The way to go
Go work wise
Razing to rise
Time after time
Go with flow
Plan and practice
All the matters
With due care
Going gets great
With the wheel
Wheel of fortune
A good time
To deal with
With the conflicts.

However
Not mixing
Bad words
With bad mood
As there exists
An opportunity
To change a mood
But not to replace
The words.

It may be
Overspending
Of time
Time and energy
Writing poetry
Impressing upon
Upon hard work
And a good gay
For romance
Retaining
A good grip
Over the odds.

Exploring
Good times
Razing to rise
Keeping on toes
Waiting
And watching
Everything
To be sorted out
On its own.
-Copyright © hrsharma ®2015
Ludhiana, Punjab, India.

Wednesday, February 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: riddle poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Exploring
Good times
Razing to rise
Keeping on toes
Waiting
And watching
Everything
To be sorted out
On its own.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhilasha Bhatt 03 February 2016

To change a mood But not to replace The words.......wisely written.....a very good write....thank u for sharing :)

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Sd Tiwari 03 February 2016

i tried to add my comments twice but failed, don't know why, nice write

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Sd Tiwari 03 February 2016

nice message contained in the poem

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Sd Tiwari 03 February 2016

nice message contained in

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