Rats Poem by Rory Hudson

Rats

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In the corners of the church
rats are scurrying and scratching
on ancient floorboards
among the dust of ages.

They are the most faithful parishioners,
for they inhabit the church
each day of their lives
not only on Sundays, or for weddings,
christenings or funerals,
but on the days mundane
that pass in dull succession through each year
when pews are empty and the sermons
and those who heard them, long since gone.

Here they are born,
here they make love
and here they die
in generation after generation
across the centuries.

At times they sit on their haunches
sniffing anxiously the air with little pink noses
and raising little pink paws together
as if in prayer.

The rats too have their place
in this wide world.
Perhaps they interrupt your prayer
with their tiny squeaking,
but God hears their squeaking
with your prayer as one voice
crying out from this world of dust
to what lies beyond.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 07 June 2009

'Here they are born, here they make love and here they die in generation after generation across the centuries.' These are the wonderful lines where you have indicated the life cycle of all living being! Very clever write! Thoughts provoking, I think. This is the earth where we all the living beings are completing the life span, can we go beyond? Excellent poem,10 with my love Rory.

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Eyan Desir 11 April 2009

interesting write Rats! I wish you had more flow in this poem

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