Raining Poem by Tom Billsborough

Raining

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Two galaxies drawn up
Two miles apart
Upon that final night
Await the obliterating dawn.

Two armies
The British and the French
Entrenched and crouched above
Their separated fires
Bowed by fear, the driving rain,
The downpour welcome
To the British high command,
But to the other brings despair.
Since their superior power
Of cannon fire will be absorbed
By the sodden ground
As they seek to pound
The British squares and enfilades
Into submission.

The vision of those dreadful missiles
Which use brave men as skittles
Will lose so much
Of their rearing, bouncing terror.

Now deep furrows shape
On Napoleon's brow
As he watches the rain again
From the flaps of his tent.
Should he now withdraw?
No, no, there is no time to spare.
His enemies gather from all quarters.
He must act now and
Deal with the Prussians later.
The rain may be a curtain
But he is certain
And has faith in his future.

Friday, June 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: war and peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 08 July 2017

Intriguing rehearsal of the capricious details of war, the small rudders in time that may turn the course of history. A rainfall, a message delayed by a thrown horse shoe, a random bullet striking at a seemingly random moment (Stonewall Jackson) - -all unpredictable yet undeniably significant in their turn. As a fan of history, I enjoyed this one immensely, Tom.

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Tom Billsborough 08 July 2017

Waterloo was a very close run thing. I have a very good book on the battle by the modern historian, Andrew Roberts. The courageous defence of the Hougemont Farm and Marshal Ney's rash attack were crucial but the heavy rain was bad news for the French and blunted their overwhelming cannon power. I'm not a War person but like you I'm fascinated by the strategies and how these can be undone in a moment by chance (as in the case of Stonewall Jackson) . One of my late wife's ancestors fought at Waterloo in the Inniskillins and I have a copy of his Waterloo pay list. He was called Charles Cameron. He survived the battle unlike many of his Regiment.

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