Raindrops Poem by Tan Pratonix
Raindrops
Cool
soft
words drop
a pattern on paper,
pitter patter
plip
plop.
Like the rain
drops circles
in a pattern on water,
pitter patter
plip
plop.
Plip plop,
pitter patter,
plop plip
plop:
The rain stops.
But cool
soft
words drop
a pattern on paper,
plip
plop.
Simple and beautiful, astrong combination.Thankyou for this.Love Duncan
This is great tan, I like your style, simple, clever, imaginative! Moyaxx
You work very well with images...I enjoy reading it!
When opening a book, I often try not to focus on familiar words, but to imagine what a curious pattern (a picture, not a text) it would be for someone who can't read. And I'm fascinated, as a savage. You captured it so well. Julia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Nice rhythm strengthened by the repetitive onomatopoeia. Simple but very effective. Regards, Justine.