Rain Drops Fall As I Lay Poem by mary mcallister

Rain Drops Fall As I Lay

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stormywheather, rain, wind, we run from it and make love.
under the moon without a thought of tommorow, love is my
inspiration your love is the key.when were in love we
make each other feel as if were both on top i remember
when you found my spot you loved it then now you do things
that make me want you more and more, and while these
raindrops are falling, its you who makes me wet you who
taps me and reminds me its raining, come inside ill get
inside, we can stay warm together. but as the rain falls
and we experience our own techinical difficulties, life
becomes a raindrop, our love digs deeper and deeper
and my body feels for you more and more,
as the storm hits we pull over
and we wait for this storm to pull out

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David SmithWhite 11 May 2009

A strong elaboration of a metaphor -stormy weather- Well done!

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