Rain Again Poem by Ruma Chaudhuri

Rain Again

Rating: 4.7


I was walking alone
and the day was rainy.
In my imagination
You were with me.

I lost the place of
my walking destination.
Both of us were walking in the rain
in my imagination.

I became alone when
the Sun shined again.
Like a tempest in my heart
tears came like a rain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bodrul Alam 22 June 2014

Brilliant! The innocence and purity of such imagination is really comforting enough to get a pair of drippy eyes. I got the same indeed. Amazed to read such a touchy note of poetic diction.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 June 2014

The lovely rains took you to the dream lands, a nice lovely expression in a simple and beautiful poem.

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Adeline Foster 22 June 2014

Yes a beautifully simple poem, as gentle as gentle rain. Read mine - Rain - Adeline

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Khairul Ahsan 25 June 2014

Rain is akin to tears. Sometimes it comes as tears of joy, sometimes as tears of sorrow. While we walk alone in the rain, we 'usually' get the latter. If there is someone to walk along with, sometimes we get the tears of joy too.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 06 July 2014

green yet resonates by rise of sun night when keeps blossoms captive sultry earth redounds to joy by touch of rain breeze hurtles home all through lurid silhouette heart ruffles deep gleaning tears to rain as love desiccates ..inspiring write by the ingenuity with imagery and metaphors,10+++.

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Dipak Adhya 05 April 2019

well written in remembering....

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 December 2018

loneliness the BEING in the beautiful lap of nature O wandering through the tears of sky from its darkly heart the clouds is the gathered pain of nature where HUMAN BEING wash of their inside if they can feel thoroughly ... ../// beautiful poem

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 December 2018

emotionally sad but good poem do read some of mine ma'am moms smiles and mothers day today so many have liked it you will also

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Rajnish Manga 20 September 2017

An emotional portrayal of the void created by the absence of a loved one. And this loneliness accentuates on a rainy day. This is marvelous. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 July 2016

your nearness in my walking steps during the rain............. i felt love and i walked and walked....... once you disappeared and i began to cry...... this is great poetry..... wonderful imagination......it touches my heart...... tony

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