Rain Poem by edria salsa

Rain

Rating: 5.0


I'm the rain
Always come
With grains of water
And cold stab

I'm the rain
Who had vent out the anger
With a rumble
And the flashes were snatched

I'm the rain
Who you always avoided
And shelter in
Enormous secure box

I'm the rain
Who you always ignored
Because you would prefer
The fire that will warm you

But, you never know
How much sacrifice
the rain
Which always

And will always come back
Even though i know
The pain after falling
Over and over again

Rain
Saturday, March 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lit,rain,sad love,storm
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 11 April 2016

I'm the rain Who you always ignored Because you would prefer The fire that will warm you........ beautiful poem . full of imagination and so much of truth and love. thank you for this poem dear poetess. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 March 2016

A beautifully conceived poem in a mood of despondency. Time to cheer-up since joy definitely replaces sorrow in the manner of night being followed by day. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Edria Salsa 26 March 2016

Thankyou :)

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